The Night Train Comments

ohhhhh superr, you rockzzz Jose. loved it a lot, its theme, its style and structure everything is good. climax of the poem is awesome. Where are the bonds? Are they fake? I wonder; I started to realize.. really an innocent question from the deep of heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! Maybe we shouldn't meet And I shouldn't asked But the time is moving fast just like a train, it won't stop for a change. this portion is amazing and also the following stanza and the ending of the poem, are really very good! ! ! loved it! keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

Nice poem, really enjoyed reading this.