Friday, August 17, 2012

The Night The Moon Got Stolen Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the night the moon got stolen
lunatics shook their fists at empty heavens,
cats stared at holes in the dark night
and seas turned into lakes, tides refused,
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Leslie Philibert
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Excellent

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Chinedu Dike 07 June 2020

Well penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. A brilliant work of art. Thanks for sharing, Leslie.

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Kim Barney 24 June 2016

I really like this one. A different take on what happens during a new moon. Well done.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2016

Have no fear for this lost face in the sky, the lady that shimmers over standing water. Aurora will bring the slow return of dawn, Libertas will free this stolen moonlight. hope there will be dawn and naturally dusk again......... in the night the moon will come and appear for you alone......... very nice fantasy and imagination...... thank you. tony

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Ruth Walters 05 April 2015

What a great idea! Another good one ;)

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Ken E Hall 20 February 2015

How could the songwriters carry on without the moon and lovers in the lane thanks for your poem that makes us appreciate it more...regards86837

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

A moonless night is a dreary night! Poets and lovers all dread such a night! Lying awake they long for an early dawn..... and Aurora is about to begin her march! Let us hope that before long, the next night be blessed by the new moon appearing in all her splendour! Beautiful poem ofd hope!

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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2014

Have no fear for this lost face in the sky, the lady that shimmers over standing water. Aurora will bring the slow return of dawn, Libertas will free this stolen moonlight- - - - - Notes of robust optimism.A beautiful poem.

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Frank (popeye) Pulver 26 September 2012

This one I like because to me it reminds me of that moonless night. Especially if you need the moon light to travel by at night.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 September 2012

A lovely poem about the New Moon.The thoughts that emanated on a moonless night is appreciable. Nice write. Thanks for the poem. Best wishes

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John Brown 31 August 2012

Though prose is not my favourite form, I enjoyed this work. Well written Leslie.

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Unwritten Soul 31 August 2012

The black veil hidden the light around spherical moon leave the shadows wonders if the will be no bright shades tonight Crescent of night seed will be born again with the spell of stars Until we see the full moon again, let our hearts shine in the dark Brave the eyes inner and outside, we will be.._Soul, Unwritten Soul

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if it would have happened! well written. thank u againg for reading mine and commenting.

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Stan Petrovich 27 August 2012

Now we appraoch greatness.

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Heather Wilson 24 August 2012

Beautiful poem, lovely title, a very interesting write.

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Deep Mukherjee 19 August 2012

It possess the power of both a poem and a portrait! ! ! ! Really a pleasure to read! ! !

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O.o. W 19 August 2012

Very good work, I enjoy the vivid style and topic Thank you for the nice comment.

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Ruthann Oliver 18 August 2012

Poem has a very nice flow.

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Mark Dillon 18 August 2012

isn't it funny how much sway the moon has, nice write.

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Wonderful moon poem, what would we writers do without this inspiring celestial body in all it's phases.

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Leslie Philibert

Leslie Philibert

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