Saturday, January 11, 2014

The Night Speaks To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night speaks to me, it says 'Lorraine,
Remove the lock from the door;
It's time to escape, time to run free,
This is what darkness is for
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Lora Colon
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John Brown 21 January 2014

This has the feel of an Edgar Allan Poe piece. Melancholy, but well written. Don't give away all your secrets though Lora.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 January 2014

Added a new dimension to the night here Lora and the day too presenting a truth gripping and real. It's not just fantasy but real heart-speak.

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Joseph Anderson 11 January 2014

A splendidly penned poem, but a troubling approach to life.Come on out and maybe your cares and fears will fade. Great use of metaphors

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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