The night speaks to me, it says 'Lorraine,
Remove the lock from the door;
It's time to escape, time to run free,
This is what darkness is for
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Added a new dimension to the night here Lora and the day too presenting a truth gripping and real. It's not just fantasy but real heart-speak.
A splendidly penned poem, but a troubling approach to life.Come on out and maybe your cares and fears will fade. Great use of metaphors
This has the feel of an Edgar Allan Poe piece. Melancholy, but well written. Don't give away all your secrets though Lora.