The Night Shift Comments

An insightful write with a captivating title. The difference between day and night has been cleverly crafted. Wonderful thoughts to ponder about.

Pleasant poem; Good guidance.

i see poetry well applied

A very clever write. Anyone would jump to ideas with the title itself. So this is a stunner and describes well how your mind works to mislead the reader and plant something else to make the other look stupid after all. nicely written, thanks - arya

hey these is a sweet lullaby indeed.. lovely write again... yeah i wana cover my self in a blanket and sleep forever too.... some times i wish i can sleep forever.... with lots of love shan

very significant..and well described theme..as this is in the nature of my job....10

Divine duality of the day and night. well penned write penetrating.10

night with day very good write i like this

this is so beautiful..let them in their dirty tricks..GOD knows best...true hearts always come out even if it rains...i would like to be kept too to stay from harm..but since you can't...so, i will just do it by myself to keep guarding myself til the middle of the night...grace

Terrific piece Kesav.....Day vs Night....crimnals look for the right time to strike, be it day or night...but you have a point, more eveil seems to happen during the day...10+++

Wow! ! ! good fight between day and night.... both look strong...

Vivid in the imagery, and subtle in the metaphors employed. A thought provoking write.

You have penned an interesting paradox here. Surely one would expect more crime to occur during the hours of the moon, and yet I've no doubt you have checked your facts and base this poem upon them. Irrespective, the poem works very well. It has a nice phlegmatic edge to it that appeals. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

The day and night are a duo, they switch shift to and fro, like conjoint twins who can not let go! Well penned Kesav! High marks.

you have weaved words in meaningful sentences..... very well written...

The night is always more inetersting than that dreary old sun, isn't it, Kesav? Nice poem. Fx

I loved the line 'let me spread my blanket black', about the night. A good, well constructed poem Kesav, I enjoyed reading it,10 Lynda xx

very interesting thought...i enjoyed it...

Yes Aabha. Most of the horrendous crimes take place in day time only. Perhaps barring the one the legendary Aswathamah did the night that ended the greatest war ever fought in the history of our universe…the war at Kurukshetra...

Excellent personifications, the thoughtful description of the activities related to time, pictographic imagery…and above all appealing to read, you night’s claim has driven all my horrors…good, that night wont tolerate the proceedings of the day… a message also precipitates…we should think individually, and dutifully obey our divine decree rather than following the uneven…