Saturday, March 24, 2012

The Night Shift (Ct- Raanu And Lago) …2403-2k12 Comments

Rating: 4.9

(Late night scene in the CT suite…dedicated to all the staff)

An aged face in the dead of night
Flashing blinkers coax a fight
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Juliana Jones 07 August 2014

Well done, thank-you for the journey you gave me.....

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Rose Flores 24 May 2012

Wonderful! Thank you for sharing the poem. A blessed evening!

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Renu Kakkar 21 May 2012

this is beautiful, your poetry lends a vivid vision to the incident...the urdu, hindi poetry style of two lines but both rhyming.

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Sayeed Abubakar 13 May 2012

You are n original poet I see. Don't you write in Urdu? Mother language is the language of poetry. You can write to me any time. My e-mail is: sayeed_jh@yahoo.com

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Valerie Dohren 08 May 2012

Excellently penned verse, great expression of content. Well done.

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Romeo Della Valle 06 May 2012

Wow! What a beautiful and great tribute to people that were around you even for short period of time. I admire your great sense of appreciation and the way you let it be felt through this well crafted and poignant write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Eman Obied 28 April 2012

you've got one beautiful unique style of writing.loved the poem very much.

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Neela Nath Das 20 April 2012

The world under a roof! Sat I always like your style of write.Come back! Waiting.!

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Shahzia Batool 05 April 2012

You carry ur own sunshine to all the roads of life you travel on... When one gets involved in n dedicated to one's profession, the drudgery becomes a pastime...this is so clear how u observe, enjoy n feel the scene around u...there's a lesson for the dissatisfied youth that be one with what field u are in....may The Almighty bless u...

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 27 March 2012

Sat..... Again a CRACKER! ! all the best...

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Dave Walker 24 March 2012

A really great poem, like it a great write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, the crow flies.

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