Thursday, November 27, 2008

The Night Pot Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you get old in Germany,
and in the night you have to pee,
remember, they have a tradition
to master this nocturnal mission,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ian Bowen 27 November 2008

Herbert, this reminded me of the policeman in 'Under Milk Wood' who used his helmet instead of the 'night pot'. Again a well thought out piece with excellent choice of word and rhyme.10/10 Ian

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Larry Stevens 27 November 2008

This is some good Sh! t!

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

Fine imagery! An unlimited imagination..very productive..and I could compare this to real life situations! Being productive.. Words neatly selected..Great poem!

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