Friday, November 7, 2014

The Night Of Halloween Comments

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Witches and ghosts, scary creatures,
Black cats silently sneaking behind the trees,
So many pumpkins with ominous features,
Their fiery eyes are burning your knees
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Bri Edwards 13 December 2014

Gergana, perhaps you'll read mine? Halloween Approaches....[Short; Scary? ; Gross? ] by Bri Edwards

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Gergana Teofilova 25 September 2015

I read it, sir. Thanks for the offer! :)

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2014

john westlake gave me your name, and i could not resist his offer OR your offer of The NIght of Halloween. i am glad i did not resist. halloween is/was one of, if not, my favorite special day of the year. as a kid i wore a cool, lifelike? witch mask which perhaps smelled a bit like the inside of a bicycle tire. when i had my little daughter to share the night with, i wore a bright orange devil mask and she wore a witch mask (with light green yarn for hair) , both of witch [i mean which! ] i made from papier mache. i really like the poem. i only might change a few little spots, so i must like it! i love the rhyming. :) - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite lines: People dress up as monsters and mummies, Trying to show they don't fear the dark, They don't understand they're nothing but dummies, A single wrong move and they are just stiff and stark AND All Hallows' Eve is just like no other, Heaven is not trying to prevail over Hell, Demons and angels are walking like brothers, As if someone has put them under a spell ..............i confess! I, bri, put them under a spell. :) bri thanks for sharing. to MyPoemList.

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