Saturday, October 17, 2020

The Night Nurse Comments

Rating: 5.0

The decision was to work at the Old Folks home
Working the night so he could be alone
Walking his rounds in the semi dark
And on the hour at his station to make his mark
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Paul Warren
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Susan Williams 18 October 2020

I put this beautiful poem on my favorite poem list and gave it top marks though the score card never shows I have voted but I tell you so you will know I found this poem to be excellent in all ways, , , and especially in its heart and soul. I will treasure this poem as will everyone who reads it

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

'He'd sit with them with and comfort them with all that he was worth' - one 'with' may be deleted from this line, preferably the second one,

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

An absolute gem of a poem! Loved the inspiring story of the 'Night Nurse' as told in the poem. 'And when an older person was on their last hours on earth He'd sit with them with and comfort them with all that he was worth And lastly he would whisper in their right ear When you see my grandfather tell him I love him dear.' - How sweet and kind of him! The poem evokes a feeling in me of doing good, that's the success of the poet. I rate this poem with a 5*****.

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