The night you vanished
From my life I found no stars
Shining in the sky
No wind blew lifting tufts
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A sad but a poem so well penned with deep sentiments.10 + to my favourite
A Mother can never be replaced by any other. She is an epitome of unconditional love.
Dear Anil ji, I am so sorry to hear that your mother passed away. The poem is so emotional and touching. I went back into the time when my mother passed away. It is a feeling of deep sorrow and numbness.
Excellently expressed! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
This is ever so heart felt! .. And I'm so sorry for your loss! ..
Very touching...loss of life gives others around a great pain...if it happens to be our own mother..then it gives us severe pain of sorrow that we are not able to get out of it...a good expressive write on mother's death...indeed touching
So sad the numb reality felt when one loses a loved one...well penned
I'm feeling the edge of a tear reading this, the title alone was painful enough, reading this felt like a piece of my soul was stripped. I can't ever end the pain. But I feel for you, thank you for sharing
Losing our Mum, is the biggest heartbreaking wrench we will ever face in our lives x Thank you for sharing.
This sad poem touched my heart. A mother's love is like no other.
Presented in full brilliance, a finest Elegy for your beloved Mother, thank you so much Anil Sir
I can feel your deepest grief in this well captured poem, tears are falling down my cheeks, so fantastically worded, reminds me of my own beloved Mom
I commented THREE times, all three times I have got a RED SIGNAL. I cannot comment with a one liner response.
You let all your emotions flow to express your deepest and sincere sorrow, I am sorry to hear about your loss.