The night you vanished
From my life I found no stars
Shining in the sky
No wind blew lifting tufts
Of my black hair
I felt like lost in the brazen
Twists and turns of the path
Leading to my adulthood
The night you breathed last
My heart pounded like a storm
Creating chaos
Darkness gripped my mind
And I fell on the ground
To wake up in my father's lap
In the black hours of the morn
I can feel your deepest grief in this well captured poem, tears are falling down my cheeks, so fantastically worded, reminds me of my own beloved Mom
Presented in full brilliance, a finest Elegy for your beloved Mother, thank you so much Anil Sir
This sad poem touched my heart. A mother's love is like no other.
Losing our Mum, is the biggest heartbreaking wrench we will ever face in our lives x Thank you for sharing.
You let all your emotions flow to express your deepest and sincere sorrow, I am sorry to hear about your loss.
A sad but a poem so well penned with deep sentiments.10 + to my favourite
A Mother can never be replaced by any other. She is an epitome of unconditional love.
Dear Anil ji, I am so sorry to hear that your mother passed away. The poem is so emotional and touching. I went back into the time when my mother passed away. It is a feeling of deep sorrow and numbness.
Excellently expressed! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I commented THREE times, all three times I have got a RED SIGNAL. I cannot comment with a one liner response.