Monday, February 29, 2016

The Night Jasmine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dawn excited the thirsty birds,
Who walk on earth and look at sky,
In a blue background her sweet pink lips.
Dejected at dusk, every dawn they try,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abhilasha Bhatt 10 March 2016

You are an amazing poet.....I loved this poem life your every poem......thank you for this beautiful sharing :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2016

Very interesting and amazing imagery is drawn about thirsty birds in this poem that expresses deep love about sky and journey of life. Earth kisses lips of a night jasmine gently and this Earth blooms with lovable light in day. Fantastic composition shared on really.10

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Seema Chowdhury 02 March 2016

Very beautiful and an inspiring write, thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 01 March 2016

A spellbinding write that is sensual and the beauty of your words spin the magic that is your captivating imagination that is a spotlight shining on your poems as they shimmer with light of your great zest and love for life!

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Kelly Kurt 01 March 2016

The romantic tones of your poetry never cease to amaze me. You are gifted.

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