Saturday, January 14, 2023

The Night Is Young And I'm Dead Comments

Rating: 4.8

He stands there
Next to my bed
It was just yesterday
When I last saw him,
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Kent Reymar Supetran
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Jim McGill 10 February 2023

I see this as very sad. Excellent poem, but it doesn't tell me the reason for the sadness..

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Heart-rending elegy.. " Let us waltz in your dreams / With the music of swans" excellent poetry…top score

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D.N. Rebb 15 January 2023

Dear young poet, what powerful words! You left me in tears. If this story is personal, my heart goes out to you. Please keep writing, it's therapeutic. And you're very talented.

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