He stands there
Next to my bed
It was just yesterday
When I last saw him,
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Heart-rending elegy.. " Let us waltz in your dreams / With the music of swans" excellent poetry…top score
Dear young poet, what powerful words! You left me in tears. If this story is personal, my heart goes out to you. Please keep writing, it's therapeutic. And you're very talented.
I see this as very sad. Excellent poem, but it doesn't tell me the reason for the sadness..