The Night I Tried To Kill Myself Comments
The night I tried to kill myself
Was like a scary dream
A knife held to my neck
No one heard me scream
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This is chilling and gruesume u have done well to let your readers feel the pain and dark side. well done indeed(only if the story ain't true)
Was the suicide thing true? I'm beginning to shiver now... 'coz you did a deadly good job! Fiona's right, Hang on tight. Life is full of surprises and we should live it everyday. Promise me you'll write more!
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7/27/2025 5:06:26 AM # 1.0.0
Your poem would work better, if you worked on the number of words/syllables in each line.