Tuesday, April 7, 2009

The Night I Could Not Love You Anymore Comments

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I'm lying with you in a bed with white sheets
We are just lying there, talking
I reach under the matress, while you start to fall asleep
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Shelby Jasmin Estrada
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this is nice. you evoked the right emotions in your words.. um.. chk the last stanza. is it on or one? ? ? ? ? ? ? good poem

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

so full of emotion this poem leaves me speechless.. love isnt love without hurt u amazing -mel

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Friday Harbor, WA
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