Thursday, July 19, 2018

The Night He Lost His Soul(A Rubaiyat) Comments

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His debt no less, paid with sorrow
Tears he never needed borrow
Love's heavy weight upon his chest
Will be the same come tomorrow
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

Debt paid in sorrow is not at all less. Death provokes thought and gives sorrow. Heart can never break in love. If it breaks it breaks due to jealousy and hatred. If self control is not there it allows a person to lose. Even for love self. control is necessary. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10

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