Wednesday, June 6, 2018

The Night Has Gone Off[ Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night has gone off
Only its shadow remains
In the breaking dawn
In the soft, moist petals
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2022

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant dear poetess! I sincerely admire the illustrious beauty of your poetry! Great ink! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Nuder, such a lovely tanka....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2018

Night has gone off but has left the shadows. We green grass and dew shine still and nature motivates us to think. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

Nudershada, there is beautiful imagery in this well crafted write. +++10

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Sandra Feldman 06 June 2018

Beautiful presentation of night's parting. That sacred moment between darkness and light. Excellently portrayed!

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