The Night Has Gone Off[ Tanka ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

The Night Has Gone Off[ Tanka ]

Rating: 5.0


The night has gone off
Only its shadow remains
In the breaking dawn
In the soft, moist petals
In the green grass wet with dew

Wednesday, June 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2022

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant dear poetess! I sincerely admire the illustrious beauty of your poetry! Great ink! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Nuder, such a lovely tanka....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2018

Night has gone off but has left the shadows. We green grass and dew shine still and nature motivates us to think. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

Nudershada, there is beautiful imagery in this well crafted write. +++10

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Sandra Feldman 06 June 2018

Beautiful presentation of night's parting. That sacred moment between darkness and light. Excellently portrayed!

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