The Night, Glorious, Unbending Comments

Brilliant piece. loved it. -

day and night...two different faces of the love life...one demanding, the other careless...in between a number of 'dawns arises'...notice the word there- pale... A beautiful poetic analogy on present day family life...your poems always tell a lot more when read in between the lines, Rani 10/10

hey Rani, You have glorified the night and silenced the day Whatever--nice write keep sharing

A very symbolic and pensive poem. lovelyRani10

Day brings light night its romantic life Both part of nature one beter than other

I think you have good balance in this poem and great feeling is shown Thankyou Rani for another lovely piece Chris x 10

there is a bias here Rani, humans need both day and night.. why dawn pale? , is it not pleasant, how elegant the sun rise..night can be silent and conceal its secrets... but imagine a world without a word......