Wednesday, October 7, 2009

The Night Before The Dawn Comments

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it was very bleak
the night before
the air was cold
and damp
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Rakesh Bedi 07 October 2009

very nice job, lalitha.....every stanza concludes beautifully, compelling the reader to move further...i wqould say; a real professional work, dear....

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Vijay Menon 07 October 2009

a fine poem by you kudos for the fine sentiments expressed10++++++++++

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Indira Babbellapati 07 October 2009

a very different night i read of here...

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rago rago 07 October 2009

Very fine write with interesting pictures.............

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Kochi, India
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