Wednesday, July 8, 2009

**the Night Before Comments

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I had the charm of the birds the night before
Pain in the bosom was like creeping death
The cage of life is akin to prism where we all
Living our broken desires on the edge of extinction
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Ejaz Khan 08 July 2009

A good write, life is a great mystery but we must go on podering!

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Rakesh Bedi 08 July 2009

..... a nice one.....!

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rago rago 08 July 2009

the night before really well written........ in gathering myself in vain with sweet notes in heavy metal....... the finish indeed..........

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