Monday, August 7, 2006

The Night At The Hospital Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tear rolls down your cheek
And off your chin.
But, this tear is unique.
It has happiness and pain within.
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Claude Davis III
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Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2006

Dear Claude This is a poem of emotion, heatfelt, pain of sadness, and yet a glimmer of hope as you will stand their side and help them with there troubles in the future Sounds like a caring person to me Well done with this one Love duncan X

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Francesca Johnson 07 August 2006

Thank you Claude. This poem is very moving. It shows all the emotions inside you, how you reproach yourself for not having been there when it happened, and how you are willing to sit for as long as it takes. It leaves the reader wondering what really happened and why you feel like you do. But that's the mystery of it. Love, Fran xx

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