Sunday, November 18, 2012

The Night Comments

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The dark shadow
above the window
has her trace
looking away and in
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Vizard Dhawan
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Asif Andalib 18 November 2012

Lovely write. It seems to me there are two typographical errors. When on the streets dogs park should be when on the streets dogs bark and How to land her your eyes should be How to lend her your eyes

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