The night
The ink leaked from heavy clouds
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Very, very powerful Full of emotional sensation on life and death, transmitted thru verses full of correct surrealistic images that take you to the sphere where the poet is and wants to take the reader. Images that shake, impress and remain. A truly amazing poem.
Jefferson Carter. Shame on me. I've found two, threw and electricity, can You kindly point at the rest? I saw some of Your poems, they are imaginative. I like the idea of tsunami
Vera, I like that conductor metaphor but the poem is hurt by your many typos and misspellings. Be careful! In a good poem, every word counts. If you'd like, check out my new webpage: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know what you think of it. Yrs, JC
Thank You very mucha, am glad you enjoyed my poem