Saturday, May 20, 2017

The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night


The ink leaked from heavy clouds
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Vera Dike
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Vera Dike 13 July 2017

Thank You very mucha, am glad you enjoyed my poem

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Sandra Feldman 12 July 2017

Very, very powerful Full of emotional sensation on life and death, transmitted thru verses full of correct surrealistic images that take you to the sphere where the poet is and wants to take the reader. Images that shake, impress and remain. A truly amazing poem.

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Vera Dike 20 May 2017

Jefferson Carter. Shame on me. I've found two, threw and electricity, can You kindly point at the rest? I saw some of Your poems, they are imaginative. I like the idea of tsunami

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Vera Dike 20 May 2017

Bernard, thank You from internal core

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 May 2017

The final destination...... a perfect 10++++

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Jefferson Carter 20 May 2017

Vera, I like that conductor metaphor but the poem is hurt by your many typos and misspellings. Be careful! In a good poem, every word counts. If you'd like, check out my new webpage: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know what you think of it. Yrs, JC

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