Thursday, September 10, 2009

The Next Step Comments

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I pick myself up from the gravel of broken dreams
I dust off the put-downs of the world and what it means
I take one step, feel the weight of the negativity on my shoulders
They may doubt, they may give up, they will all see, that I am the bolder
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Quin Faas 04 October 2009

giving up's not a option, failures not what I do- great line-great poem

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Tai Chi Italy 14 September 2009

Yes you do! And you always will do. Just one step at a time, is all any of us can do. Great write on, how we keep trucking on. Smiling at you Tai

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