Monday, May 11, 2020

The Next Road Comments

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Dedicated to all seekers,
who walk the difficult path of knowledge

There are so many roads to take you
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 23 May 2020

daniel, i find this lovely with its three images easy to picture in my mind and well-phrased. the one of the mole stands out, i think because i use the image of a mole (for the first and, so far, only time) in my poem Hope Is. -glen

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Bharati Nayak 14 May 2020

Will you look into the sky, and wait for a hawk or eagle drag your sight across the western pillars? Is that the strength you want to emulate? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Or will you close your eyes against wavelets ignited by sunlight, and envision the warm islands you visited In the Persian Gulf?

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