The Next Poet’s Exhilarating Dream Comments

'...back-alley midnight dead'? That is a FABULOUS line! Very visual. LOVE it! S

Uriah, this is the best of your poems I have read. Each line rings true and your theme is extremely universal but creative. Good work. Raynette

This is an extremely good poem, very original in substance, with nice imagery and a great ending. Well done!

Wonderful free verse. I have enjoyed this. Thank you for reviewing my poem. Sherry

Well, the last stanza brings a kind of romantic dream home with a lot of impact, and I think it's a dream most of us have had at one time or another. And it's VERY well put.

Sounds like a Plathian sentiment, Uriah. But why not stick around and enjoy the fruits of your labor? ...as meager as they can be for poets. I get your wistful point though...and it was put forth nicely. Good job.

I liked the last stanza especially the part 'create their art and flee'. Good write!