Saturday, December 11, 2010

The Next Day Of Beggar Maid Comments

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Yesterday was her last day, .
That she begged for alms, gay, all day.
None could say that day,
She would the Queen next day.
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Narayanan Ramakrishnan
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 17 February 2011

classical touch is there. marks 10

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Jenny Gordon 17 February 2011

Wow. Unfamiliar with the Tennyson piece for which you wrote this, I must say it is very interesting, fascinating, and consequently, rather intriguing. The begger elevated to royal honour....marvelous, and seemingly reminiscent of Cinderella and so many other fairytales. You rendered it delightfully in rhymed quatrains. What a kind father! I quite enjoyed this!

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