..The Newcomer Comments
I opened the door. I stood and looked around
everything was different, the place was new,
the atmosphere, the scent, the people, the sound
seemed in every corner were unfamiliar view.
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beautiful description from the core of your heart it is! 10+
This poem reminded me of my first day at school and the similar emotions felt.I like the rhythm and a spontaneous flow it produces when reciting. Thanks for sharing :) A.
A wonderful subject for a poem and one we all remember - with a shudder. Being 'new' is always awful. You share your 'newness' with great spontaneity. I particularly liked 'their eyebrows arched like a shimmering rainbow'. Good poem. Love, Allie x x x x
You have captured the moment here. The first day at school is a very difficult time.
A very warm welcom that was one of the definig moment of your life. The remembrances are indeed very much special for us and we should rather safekeep them for they would be the only ascet we would have in our old age and at that particular time one lives in companionship of nostalgia when one had some wonderful memories.
What a welcome that was for you Jazlle. I remember my first day at High School and I didn't know anybody and I was so shy. Your story is told beautifully and I felt as if I was with you all the way. 10 Karin Anderson
a beautiful poem for beautiful friendship, with a beautiful touching description...
It feels great when U R in that position, and a great friendship develops. Nicely written Hugo, a thing which happens to most of the people.
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7/21/2025 7:39:41 AM # 1.0.0
This poem reminds me when I transferred to another school the same feeling I felt. Aja, Jaz!