Fewer creeks
blacker starlings
fewer home-made killing-jars
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The tempo reminds me of a very famous poem but I can't put my finger on it. Still, your choice of words effects me.
Steel and concrete gorging meadows and even deserts...................open up and feel indeed..........That was so short and straight...........thank u for sharing..............I have a poem something in the same theme........time plz let me know what u think about it..........
A brilliant poem, very nice to read it…..keep spreading pearls before us. Thanks a lot.
This is one of my favs of yours. So many great phrases! You set the scene well too. S.
in the twilight in the gloaming open up and feel again. a nice poem
in the twilight in the gloaming open up and feel again. a nice poem
in the twilight in the gloaming open up and feel again. a nice poem
Seems like the world is in more flux as we get older. Nostalgia kicks in to bring us back home one more time. Comforting lines.
Oh man this may be my favorite of yours. Identify strongly with the theme too.
Secret places of Nature! Thanks for sharing.