Wednesday, August 27, 2014

The New Life: Fifth Stage For Marie Comments

Rating: 5.0

An Autumn Picture

Leaves, pale and dry,
fall
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Daniel Brick
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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2018

Daniel, I read this one before any of the others in the series. By accident. (Probably was meant to be) . And now that I've re-read it, all I can say is WOW! For the 3rd time! That has to be some kind of record!

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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2018

YES! YES! YES! Or as you would say, Daniel: Wow! And Wow Again! I love this visionary style of poetry. And man, I'm really looking forward to the rest of the series. Where have I been all this time?

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Valsa George 29 August 2014

I have been following this Pilgrim's progress from the time of Daniel's first encounter with Monica the seer in a Garden in Golden Valley! The poet in his wanderings and also in the composition of poems is again interrupted by the same seer who asks him to get ready for a real change.... some kind of an enlightenment! The readers are taken to the brink of deepening suspense! But in Minneapolis Street, again she appears as a haggard old woman worn with age and the hard grind of life, may be but still with sparkle left in her eyes! She announces that Daniel is not yet prepared well enough to receive the Enlightenment.... He has to give up his yearnings that pin him down and then he will feel light and will be able to soar in untrammeled freedom when he will have Lucid Dreams! What next..... we are all eager! The story is progressing through unanticipated bends and diverging into new tracks! ! Just WONDERFUL! ! Are we for a Buddha in the making!

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