A poet longs for his to be
A love as strong as death - we crave
A Song of Songs, of jealousy
Unyielding as the grave -
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Longer poem than the last one I read by you, but not one word was wasted and it seams that you know how to get your point across. Both poems get a ten.
Wow, this is really brilliantly done, very heartfull