Monday, September 28, 2020

The New Eden Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're my Adam as I am yr Eve
Let the rebirth of Eden begin
Where harmony would live for eons
And hate would be banished
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Mj Lemon 30 September 2020

Profound, LeeAnn. For rebirth to happen there must be death. Perhaps the world is right now making possible the conditions that will give way to rebirth. Brilliant verse!

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Kostas Lagos 29 September 2020

Splendid poem Leeann.5 stars

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 September 2020

A fascinating poem, but a poet's note would be helpful to explain who Lilith is. Thanks for posting.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 September 2020

let the love be the sense of humor for the new Eden!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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