Wednesday, August 10, 2005

The New Car Deal Comments

Rating: 4.1

'But do not come to Daddy,
crying, come Monday morning
expecting to pay what I offer you
right here and now, so come,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 10 August 2005

They say at the bottom of river are catfish, lawyers, and car dealers.....you just proved that point beautifully. Good write Herbert!

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glen still 10 August 2005

Herbert...the best piece of descriptive manipulation i have ever read! CUDOS!

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