Monday, August 15, 2011

The New Beginning Comments

Rating: 4.5

Is this how the New Year is going to be?
Now we live in a world
where we don't know when will disaster strikes us.
With new technology
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zainab zaheen
COMMENTS
Emily Angel 19 August 2011

Really interesting and carries a strong message...I have been here once....Wishing this world was a better place to live...Excellent write! ! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 August 2011

I wish also new beginning of the humane world.Well done and message well established here.

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Esther Ayala 17 August 2011

I like this one too. thanks 4 inviting me to read your poems. This one kinda reminds me of my poem 'A world far from love.' I agree with Debra, we all can contribute, but the real solution will be in God.

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Gary Manning 16 August 2011

I like it..8 I'd like to read more of you poems and will do so. Hope you read mine as well

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Christina Phan 16 August 2011

Wishing everything going be ok. you put your emotional and thoughts thought this poems very goood job on that.

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

What a cry from the heart! ! ! I too wish the world could be a better place. We all can contribute to making this world a better place.

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 August 2011

This poem is an eye opener.Definitely worth hall of fame.

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