Sunday, February 22, 2009

The Neverending Tower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond trees and forests
I start my journey.
Away from everything thats cold and sour.
Past valleys, mountains I reach the big white tower.
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

I agree that this writing is full of imagery but what does it mean. Imagery, without meaning is just writing with no purpose. There must always be a clear purpose to any writing, otherwise it is just a waste of ink. GW62

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Fiona Davidson 22 February 2009

Excellent strong write Cyril....full of imagery...thank you for sharing it....10++

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