Pretty good but I think it's uneven... I mostly loved about the first half of the first part, the poem is engaging and deep from the beginning, but then it gets so long, i admit i got a bit lost, although very good lines kept coming up here and there... maybe you should consider shortenind the second half, you can make your point with fewer lines. again, but the beginning really touched me, i found it brilliant.
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Pretty good but I think it's uneven... I mostly loved about the first half of the first part, the poem is engaging and deep from the beginning, but then it gets so long, i admit i got a bit lost, although very good lines kept coming up here and there... maybe you should consider shortenind the second half, you can make your point with fewer lines. again, but the beginning really touched me, i found it brilliant.