The Never Opening Door Comments

This poem is amazing! I love it! it expresses so much in just one verse it's lovely :)

i like this pome of yours, its very expressive, and you've used what's called a broken recorded effect, to enforce your feelings towards the other. but i must say when things like this happen, its not always best to hold anykind of hate for the other individual, cause it will only cause you heartache too in a way, better to end it wisely or on good terms so that door doesn't freeze things in the future...

heart when hurtful by the reeks of sorrow love when betrayed by the pretension eyes yet gleans by the tears mind seems to flinch by the ire.............yet painful and poignant, eloquence of love unsmilingly rocked up by the remorse, ingeniously true, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

your frustation shown in each line...........hope she'll comeback to you.nice piece.