Friday, January 19, 2018

The Never Ending War Comments

Rating: 4.5

I live in a landscape where deer cavort
So I often stop and pause for thought
And relish within the sweet fresh air
Or the wind and rain, or summers glair
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James S Newcomb Lang
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 January 2018

Very impressive write, James. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 19 January 2018

A very intense poem filled with truth, dread and pain regarding the wars this world has gone through. The root cause mostly is greed for power and land, an insatiable desire for more that not only causes death but the final demise of man.

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Paul Reed 19 January 2018

I got lulled in by the he first two verses which are are pleasant and reflective but then war destroys all that. Well contrasted and written.

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James S Newcomb Lang

James S Newcomb Lang

Sevenoaks Kent UK
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