Wednesday, May 2, 2007

The Never-Ending Fight... Comments

Rating: 5.0

As she lays there falling apart
How does she feel, what is she thinking?
I will never know
I couldnt imagine
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Dean Simpson
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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007

What a wonderful and memorable poem! I really liked the line 'I'll run through the white of the clouds! ' The title fits the poem perfectly and the ending is optimistic. You will be with her again someday Dean! Physically, we expire, but our souls entwined in true love's warmth has no shelf life! Take care Dean. Top marks! -Michael

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