The Nest Comments

nicely made out; thought well put into lines

Sounding very contemporary.. very nicely expressed in beautiful verses! ! Thank you for sharing! ! 10!

For an unknown star! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Stretching the wings with all our might, Soaring away from the nest so warm, With the grace so divine, and his unfailing clasp, - - to fulfill the beautiful............. yes determination to fly and to achieve your goals......... very nice positive thought in poetic language....... thank you dear poetess. tony

part 3...... : : Stretching the wings with all our might, : : And execute your karma wholeheartedly.. : : Soaring away from the nest so warm: : But leaving the cozy comfort of one's home is the most difficult task.. Beautiful write.. A marvelous 100+++

part 2.... : : Unsure of those destined paths, : : but, to call these 'UNSURE' steps DESTINED is something quite different; inviting the reader to the Indian philosophy. Bhagavat Gita says: : : KaRmaNye Va Adhikaaraste: : Your work is your destiny... - - continued in part3....

Hi Ashika, Glad to meet you on this page, for the first time. This is a beautiful poem, exuding positive energy.... : : Reaching out for an unknown star, : : - every step we make is exactly this way.. trying the unknown! , even the first step of a baby.. Very poignant thought.... ,

A great start with a nice optimistic poem, You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

Having journey to stars is nice and reach far abode is uncertain but still hope is there to travel in destined path. To fulfill the beautiful half seen dreams birds fly above snowy clouds. We also fly to materialize our dreams. A nice nest inspires for pleasant living and purposeful flight. A great imagery is drawn in this poem. Excellently penned poem is shared here....10