Tuesday, August 9, 2011

The Needles Of Time Comments

Rating: 3.9

The needles of time, it is so really right,
You can’t get it back, it just passes by.
When you’re in a rush, you find it slips by,
When you’re doing nothing, it always respites.
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Meriam Joseph
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Sharif Tamal 01 January 2016

nice one. liked it meriam.. keep it up

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Jm Toboso 17 December 2015

meriam you are a genious, this poem artistically brings out the human folly of procrastinating. it couldnt have been expressed better than this. i love it n am keeping it to remind me of the need to act and work on all matters on time.kudos

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Chloe Lubinska 15 December 2015

Hi Meriam! Beautifully contributed statement about how the time we have we should make the most of it before the hands on the clock beat us at our own game. Please keep writing love reading your stuff!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 October 2015

Keep track of time, Or you’ll lose it, Time is really precious, The needles of time never wait anyway. Verily, time never waits for anyone

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Yinka Meander 30 June 2015

I love this poem. i am impressed with the quality of your thoughts Miriam.

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Nishtha Trivedi 21 June 2015

Loved the poem Meriam :)

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Kpekot Egweteng 20 June 2015

Nice piece dear...yes, time is precious and should be managed positively.

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Kpekot Egweteng 20 June 2015

Time, they say, waits for no one. Nice poem.

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Stella Mary 30 December 2011

Yes, time is really precious

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Donna Caldwell 10 November 2011

hi, loved your poem Meriam, you are very talented, i'm sorry it has taken so long to comment on your poetry! !

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 September 2011

A delightful poem...my pleasure to read...I am impressed that already you know the value of time and that it waits for noone. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Ken E Hall 24 August 2011

Original poem and the start in your time to write some super stuff you have the talent and read some of the masters works to get a sound grounding...regards

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Rugyinsun Alwayslearns 21 August 2011

A nice poem. lets racing time

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David Joel Rodriguez 20 August 2011

Nice work Meriam! 'Time is precious...lets not waste it'

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Diana Kauke 19 August 2011

This is really amazing! ^^ I like the lines and the thought you put in them. Keep up the good job! ^^

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 August 2011

Your imagination is superb. Keep it up.

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Richard Prosper 18 August 2011

Hello Meriam! This poem was very wonderful; you show a wisdom that many people a lot older have yet to possess, when it comes to their perception of time. Keep writing!

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Robert Roberts 18 August 2011

very talented time waits for no oneis make use of it now

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Jinal Oswal 18 August 2011

Hi Meriam, the poem is wonderful. Very thoughtful, thank you for asking me to read this. Keep up the good work dear :)

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R Stansfield 18 August 2011

I like this poem a lot, you have such inspiring words, it provokes me to think where does time really go? keep it up

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