The needles of time, it is so really right,
You can’t get it back, it just passes by.
When you’re in a rush, you find it slips by,
When you’re doing nothing, it always respites.
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meriam you are a genious, this poem artistically brings out the human folly of procrastinating. it couldnt have been expressed better than this. i love it n am keeping it to remind me of the need to act and work on all matters on time.kudos
Hi Meriam! Beautifully contributed statement about how the time we have we should make the most of it before the hands on the clock beat us at our own game. Please keep writing love reading your stuff!
Keep track of time, Or you’ll lose it, Time is really precious, The needles of time never wait anyway. Verily, time never waits for anyone
I love this poem. i am impressed with the quality of your thoughts Miriam.
Nice piece dear...yes, time is precious and should be managed positively.
hi, loved your poem Meriam, you are very talented, i'm sorry it has taken so long to comment on your poetry! !
A delightful poem...my pleasure to read...I am impressed that already you know the value of time and that it waits for noone. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Original poem and the start in your time to write some super stuff you have the talent and read some of the masters works to get a sound grounding...regards
Nice work Meriam! 'Time is precious...lets not waste it'
This is really amazing! ^^ I like the lines and the thought you put in them. Keep up the good job! ^^
Hello Meriam! This poem was very wonderful; you show a wisdom that many people a lot older have yet to possess, when it comes to their perception of time. Keep writing!
Hi Meriam, the poem is wonderful. Very thoughtful, thank you for asking me to read this. Keep up the good work dear :)
I like this poem a lot, you have such inspiring words, it provokes me to think where does time really go? keep it up
nice one. liked it meriam.. keep it up