Sunday, November 13, 2005

The Necromancy Whim Comments

Rating: 4.0

All the townspeople disappeared
except for a man with very rotten teeth.
Fetal positioned on his manifesto,
he can proofread in his sleep.
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MARINA GIPPS
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Ray Lucero 25 February 2006

Marina, Read it once, scratched my head, Read it twice, meaning still fled, Read it thrice, crawled under bed, No need for fourth, glad I'm not dead! Ray

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 13 November 2005

Well, you brought this image to life, Marina. Nice write! I like the title. 'Necromancy Whim'...a 'tad' grim, although good.

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MARINA GIPPS

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