Saturday, August 22, 2015

The Naughty Number Eight Comments

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Oh You! The naughty number eight,
Why do you like to play with my fate?
I don’t believe in numerology,
Still I see you are naughty with me,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Amitava Sur 26 August 2015

A nice imaginative poem where I was enjoying the undulating 8 being sometimes somewhere and again somewhere else along with the variance of thoughts. Interesting one! ! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 22 August 2015

Nice rhythmic poem...........

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Jaishree Nair 22 August 2015

A thread of thought well defined. The vagaries of 8 playing hide n seek in naughtiness humorously penned. Thank you

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 August 2015

An interesting poem........................................10

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Gajanan Mishra 22 August 2015

I have started loving you.. good one..

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