Monday, July 27, 2015

The Naughty Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds! You are very naughty! !
Not only because,
You excite the living matter,
To enjoy the pleasure of love,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 29 July 2015

As clouds weave patterns in the sky, you weave beautiful images in the mind of the readers! Enjoyed!

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Khalid Saifullah 28 July 2015

A naughty but beautiful approach, yes, clouds are clouds and may acquire any shape, these are are the winds that titillate....................10.

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Beautiful poem Sir. A garland made of beautiful words and thoughts. Thanks for sharing. (10)

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 July 2015

A beautiful poem, enjoyed it with the rains..........................10

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