Monday, May 8, 2017

The Naughty Boy And The Star Comments

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The queue of lips two eyes to sue,
A naughty shout, snake in the queue,
Queue in seconds completely shattered!
The naughty boy didn't flattered,
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Akhtar Jawad
blue snake Lips
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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2017

Shattered! Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 08 May 2017

I was enough to shout 'snake in the queue', the order was maintained and wish was fulfilled. Thanks for sharing a wonderful limerick.

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Valsa George 08 May 2017

I think this is a quick write like a glass of steaming instant coffee!

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