The Naughty Beggar Comments

Thus the naughty beggar has learned the art of getting armfuls by hook or crook! Interesting poem!

An interesting poem......................................10

Nicely thought and written poem........I liked it. I invite you to read my poems.Thanks.

Another gem from the pen of Akhtar Jawad!

I have to be sincere to literature, this piece lacks the initial build up of the plot and leaves the imagination to do a lot of work. Would be nice if this poem could please the senses a little more, then it will be perfect.