Saturday, September 16, 2017

The Nature's Comfort Comments

Rating: 4.8

How can you be sad,
When birds around you are glad,
Happily flying, chirping and gliding?
This is our Mother Nature's play of comforting!
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Vaibhav Simha
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Valsa George 18 May 2020

This poem presents the comfort Nature can provide! When everything in nature augurs happiness and joy, how can human mind alone remain sad and dejected? The surroundings can make our mind bright or gloomy. So saunter into Nature, when one is weighed down! Nature also teaches the lessons to survive and to be winners in the fight for existence. Except for minor language errors which you can correct on attentive reading, the poem is well composed.

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Cheryl Tutaan 16 September 2017

Until you realize, who created this? It's God, the almighty and the spreader of bliss I truly enjoyed reading every word of it...i loved the way you give life to the nature in this poem and the rhyming of words as well... thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, Vaibhav....10++++ Cheryl

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Vaibhav Simha 17 September 2017

Thank you, if interested, you can read my other poems as well. P.S. I recommend my poem Rainbow Above the Tree.

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