Last night I met all my friends so dear
We played cards and drank a lot of beer.
Together with friends, what a wonderful day.
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very nice.... very different... very well written....
Absolutely hilarious and funny, never before reading about nature's call was so enjoyable...waiting for more
Nice use of words to describe moments. Writing about experiences in life is just part of poetry. DC
great work mate...very interesting read could imagine the scenerio as I read along... maja aa gaya....
Absolutely fabulous. Never before has a tongue in cheek humour been written with such finesse and artistry. I can only sit back and admire.
hey natures call nice hilarious one...... you made me laugh all the way -10 anjali
Ammmmmazing work out! fine words chosen! 10+