Friday, July 24, 2009

The Nature's Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I met all my friends so dear
We played cards and drank a lot of beer.

Together with friends, what a wonderful day.
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Piyush Sharma
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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Ammmmmazing work out! fine words chosen! 10+

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there is a poet in me! 26 August 2009

very nice.... very different... very well written....

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Preeti Chauhan 18 August 2009

Absolutely hilarious and funny, never before reading about nature's call was so enjoyable...waiting for more

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Surya . 29 July 2009

really a diffrent poem.interesting. voted10 surya

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Deborah Cromer 29 July 2009

Nice use of words to describe moments. Writing about experiences in life is just part of poetry. DC

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Musical Notes 27 July 2009

great work mate...very interesting read could imagine the scenerio as I read along... maja aa gaya....

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Siddharth Singh 26 July 2009

Absolutely fabulous. Never before has a tongue in cheek humour been written with such finesse and artistry. I can only sit back and admire.

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Anjali Sinha 25 July 2009

hey natures call nice hilarious one...... you made me laugh all the way -10 anjali

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