Sunday, October 22, 2017

The Nature Of Truth - A Science Fiction Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is not the whole story.
Truth in our world is always
a fragment whose jagged edges
suggest an equally jagged whole.
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 27 October 2017

Is it not better to live each fragment of time fully, to listen to the music of the present for its temporary glory, to absorb each day's partial truth, and to embrace the inevitable darkness of night, as our dreams anticipate moments of wonders yet to come? i like this, daniel. and within it, to listen to the music of the present for its temporary glory... i like it as poetry, and i like it because it strikes me as so characteristic of you. and yes, it is better. and it's all we have. i think of a noticing that was a long time in coming in my journey as a christian, that nowhere in the sermon in the mount does jesus tell us we're blessed when we have the perfect doctrine. —as if anyone could have it. i associate this with the kind of hairsplitting of those who think the whole truth is theirs and no one else's who's not in their camp. (please pardon me if i've mentioned this before; it's a foundational stone in my understanding.) may we duck at the right time and treasure in our hearts the partial truths that nourish us. glen

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Daniel Brick 27 October 2017

THOSE WHO THINK THE WHOLE TRUTH IS THEIRS etc. That false idea was drummed into me relentlessly by family at home, nuns at school, priests in the pulpit, That Roman Catholic bias that everything else was either wrong or evil stifled me and I broke free. I appreciate you see this poem as characteristic of me. It's not faith that is the mystery: the Universe is the Mystery.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 October 2017

Truth is indeed a mystery. And we all might have our own different truths. But yes, one thing is common, it's hard to find Wholeness in the world. We might put the pieces n fragments together but there are always cracks that won't give us a clear picture. It's lovely to imagine the worlds beyond ours n i love the way your imagination flies to those distant spaces to probe n explore the lives unlike ours. But whatever the world, the Soul of Truth must be the same everywhere, i reckon. What you classify as science fiction is much deeper Daniel. A 10.

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Daniel Brick 27 October 2017

Hi Nosheen THE SOUL OF TRUTH MUST BE THE SAME EVERYWHERE I saw a Science Fiction movies some years ago which embodied this idea. A man in his 50s was on the HAJ with his two grown sons. Instead of camel caravan, sailing ship, or jet plane, they were traveling by spaceship but MEKKA on planet Earth was still their goal. They performed their five-times daily prayer in the spaceship. The rest of the movie was routine SF but that Islamic element gave the story a gravitas that startled me and raised it above expectations. // Thanks as always for your appreciation, Nosheen. You are such a treasured friend. That is an always truth!

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