Tuesday, July 16, 2013

The Nature Of Things Comments

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Is there a part of me that always existed?
Vivid color thoughts drift through my mind.
I'm an instrument who nature uses as a paintbrush.
Nature has not revealed their true identity.
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Shelly Langley
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Chinedu Dike 15 May 2020

A profound philosophical reflection written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Rachelle.

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Howard Savage 20 September 2016

Great poem with a strong and prodigious sense of emotions. Great write.

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Dave Walker 16 July 2013

We have to question everything. A great poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 July 2013

about the nature of the universe, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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